For example, we collect:</p> <ul> <li>Registration information you provide when you create an account or a Campaign, enter a promotion, or link your profile on a third-party site or platform with your registration account, such as your first name and last name, country of residence, gender, date of birth, email address, username, and password.</li>
changes-requested: I suggest making the annotation a bit wider like for example:
"For example, we collect: Registration information you provide when you create an account or a Campaign,
enter a promotion, or link your profile on a third-party site or platform with your registration account, such as your first name and last name, country of residence, gender, date of birth, email address, username, and password."
Currently the annotation does not convey the meaning.
I made the excerpt wider as you proposed
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