The court of law governing the terms is in Connecticut


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Status: DECLINED
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Author: shiftydino (32555)


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On 2023-04-13 17:25:03 UTC, Agnes_de_Lion (20760) Staff wrote:

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Place of business isn't necessarily where the court is collected.
In this case, the court is in the US.
I'd suggest changing the quote to: "By accessing this Web site, you and WinZip Computing agree that all matters relating to your access to, or use of, this Web site shall be governed by the statutes and laws of the state of Connecticut, without regard to the conflicts of laws principles thereof."

And also replacing in the title "location X" by the actual location.

On 2023-04-14 22:18:01 UTC, shiftydino (32555) wrote:

Sorry, I tried to change the quote on my phone but it took the wrong excerpt and now I can't change it. I will correct this tomorrow when I can get to my computer :)

On 2023-04-15 15:29:39 UTC, Agnes_de_Lion (20760) Staff wrote:

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I put this on changes-requested again so that you remember to change the quote.
Sometimes when the change involves selecting an excerpt from another agreement, the system bugs and doesn't manage to select the right one. If it is the case, you may need to decline this one and create a new point.



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