TOS;DR suggestion


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TOS;DR suggestion


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On 2018-05-18 13:49:30 UTC, Deleted wrote:

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On 2018-05-23 12:41:30 UTC, Deleted wrote:

https://groups.google.com/forum/#!msg/tosdr/IJSqBfgQ0wY/nRMT7oszmroJ
Hi!

I recently came across your TOS;DR project, and i must say, bravo! People always love a new idea, and your's is just great!
I would like to suggest a very minute improvement. I am no law person, just an ordinary layman. So I can't suggest something in that regard. But here's my suggestion anyway.
While reading the simplified TOS for Facebook, I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes :(. In the third clause, you have mis-spelled solicit as "sollicit", and in the fifth one, you have written "Facebok" instead of "Facebook".
Now I know these are small mistakes, but I think coming from a law student (if I am not mistaken about your project lead's profession), it looks a bit un-professional. It's nothing personal, I assure you. I love your project, and will stay tuned for website ratings and more :)
Sincerely yours,Qasim ZaibAuthor: www.TechEclipse.com

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On 2018-05-30 12:50:15 UTC, Deleted wrote:

imported status as declined



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Version 2: 2018-05-18 13:49:30 UTC by Deleted

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Version 3: 2018-05-17 08:37:57 UTC by Deleted

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