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I recently came across your TOS;DR project, and i must say, bravo! People always love a new idea, and your's is just great!
I would like to suggest a very minute improvement. I am no law person, just an ordinary layman. So I can't suggest something in that regard. But here's my suggestion anyway.
While reading the simplified TOS for Facebook, I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes :(. In the third clause, you have mis-spelled solicit as "sollicit", and in the fifth one, you have written "Facebok" instead of "Facebook".
Now I know these are small mistakes, but I think coming from a law student (if I am not mistaken about your project lead's profession), it looks a bit un-professional. It's nothing personal, I assure you. I love your project, and will stay tuned for website ratings and more :)
Sincerely yours,Qasim ZaibAuthor: www.TechEclipse.com
www.tos-dr.info // www.twitter.com/tosdr // www.github.com/Unhosted/ToS-DR
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