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https://groups.google.com/forum/#!msg/tosdr/eZ1SGvlU1Ng/bacrE7BKtGkJ Le mercredi 13 juin 2012 à 18:56 -0500, Thad Guidry a écrit :
> Here's one example: Class A - How can "The Terms" of a service PAY ?
> Nothing is intended as a cost there. Perhaps better to replace the
> term "pay" with "use" or perhaps...
I'm obviously not a native English speaker, let alone a writer myself.
So feel free to correct any weird expression and give git pull request.
To "pay care" is probably not the right expression and comes from the
French. In this context, it has nothing to do with money or cost. Please
give the benefit of the doubt a bit more rather than framing it as
> The terms of service is well worded for user readability, and also the
> operator of the service follows best practices.
Readability is only one of many aspects of what makes ToS good. What's
important is transparency, fairness and adherence to community standards
(aka "best practice"). Please help us translate that in good (aka
Simple) English. Thanks
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