The court of law governing the terms is in location X


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On 2021-04-27 20:50:33 UTC, Agnes de Lion Staff wrote:

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I suggest changing to a quote more related to the choice of law governing the agreement, such as:

"APPLICABLE LAW.a. United States and Canada. If you acquired the application in the United States or Canada, the laws of the state or province where you live (or, if a business, where your principal place of business is located) govern the interpretation of these terms, claims for breach of them, and all other claims (including consumer protection, unfair competition, and tort claims), regardless of conflict of laws principles.b. Outside the United States and Canada. If you acquired the application in any other country, the laws of that country apply.".

Since there's no defined location governing the terms, you could replace "location X" by something like "your state or country of residence".

On 2021-06-27 22:05:06 UTC, System Bot wrote:

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