changes-requested: Please quote the text from the pertinent Document (@ https://edit.tosdr.org/services/192/annotate). (Copypasting this message as many of your points commit the same mistake.)
The linked document seems to be missing the relevant quote and table.
It doesn't look like the "Use of Cookies and Similar Technologies" section of the Privacy Policy ended up getting included in the linked form.
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